Red-haired Scottish Illustrator working as a stunt double for the lead character on Pixar's Brave.
I wish... I just draw fantasy stuff.
It's gotten a lot darker (which is ok for a dramatic effect), but it lost a lot of the mid range values and a big part of the image is very high in contrast. That kind of breaks it apart and makes it a bit difficult to read. If I was confident enough to make suggestions, I'd suggest to do some blending. ;)Have contrast where it's important and where you want the viewer to look, lose edges and sharp value jumps elsewhere.(also one minor thing - the eyes looked scarier before you made them smaller, the eye-white stood out.)
Thanks Jan :) I agree, made it far too contrasty. Was looking at the older wip and preferred it then. Going to go back and tweak it.Thanks for watching and the crit :)